第五章 何為作者？

　　{"body":[{"id":"30807831078677750","sort":"1","type":1,"role":"29536307369018801","content":"醫(yī)院里。"},{"id":"30807833780069581","sort":"1025","type":1,"role":"29536443465554659","content":"對(duì)不起表哥大人！我不是故意的"},{"id":"30807838612172176","sort":"2049","type":1,"role":"30797189778862210","content":"額……"},{"id":"30807844232794740","sort":"3073","type":1,"role":"30797189778862210","content":"描述一下我現(xiàn)在的樣子"},{"id":"30807849870255744","sort":"4097","type":1,"role":"29536443465554659","content":"這個(gè)……您頭上頂著個(gè)雞蛋！"},{"id":"30807851471219629","sort":"5121","type":1,"role":"30797189778862210","content":"哦。"},{"id":"30807853091712263","sort":"6145","type":1,"role":"30797189778862210","content":"小兔崽子！"},{"id":"30807857135265785","sort":"7169","type":1,"role":"30797189778862210","content":"我去抓小偷，你跟出來(lái)干什么！"},{"id":"30807867309645068","sort":"8193","type":1,"role":"30797189778862210","content":"是我提不動(dòng)手銬了還是你小子飄了！"},{"id":"30807871614675891","sort":"9217","type":1,"role":"30797189778862210","content":"還隔著二十米就扔板磚？"},{"id":"30807874289364746","sort":"10241","type":1,"role":"30797189778862210","content":"你以為你是神仙投彈手？"},{"id":"30807877510821941","sort":"11265","type":1,"role":"30797189778862210","content":"扔你也靠近了再扔啊喂！角度再往下一點(diǎn)點(diǎn)我腦袋就開(kāi)花了！"},{"id":"30807879416474897","sort":"12289","type":1,"role":"30797189778862210","content":"哎呦！痛痛痛！"},{"id":"30807882342793700","sort":"13313","type":1,"role":"29562169760114365","content":"得了，別教訓(xùn)你老弟了"},{"id":"30807892829260263","sort":"14337","type":1,"role":"29536443465554659","content":"十分抱歉……"},{"id":"30807899792434255","sort":"15361","type":1,"role":"29562169760114365","content":"行啦，小偷逮住了比什么都好說(shuō)"},{"id":"30807903550746318","sort":"16385","type":1,"role":"29562169760114365","content":"如果不是那一板磚讓小偷樂(lè)了一下"},{"id":"30807908644370188","sort":"17409","type":1,"role":"29562169760114365","content":"我還不知道能不能撂倒他呢！嘿嘿，功勞簿上有你一筆！"},{"id":"30807930137151211","sort":"18433","type":1,"role":"29536443465554659","content":"哥，對(duì)方可是拿著那么尖的一把水果刀啊"},{"id":"30807931469503208","sort":"19457","type":1,"role":"29536443465554659","content":"您不怕么"},{"id":"30807938197557658","sort":"20481","type":1,"role":"30797189778862210","content":"怕？怕我就不逮他了？"},{"id":"30807944884992841","sort":"22529","type":1,"role":"30797189778862210","content":"這是我的使命，為了使命人應(yīng)該有舍棄一切的覺(jué)悟……算了，我們隊(duì)長(zhǎng)的話說(shuō)給你也不懂"},{"id":"30807973884606192","sort":"23553","type":1,"role":"29562169760114365","content":"喂，那我就領(lǐng)著你弟先回去了，現(xiàn)在可是半夜兩點(diǎn)"},{"id":"30807982753461436","sort":"21505","type":1,"role":"30797189778862210","content":"既然想做到就一定要做到，既然已經(jīng)開(kāi)始了追擊就必須追上"},{"id":"30807990796897934","sort":"24577","type":1,"role":"30797189778862210","content":"麻煩你了小雅"},{"id":"30807992139124523","sort":"25601","type":1,"role":"29562169760114365","content":"嗯？"},{"id":"30807995645885933","sort":"26625","type":1,"role":"30797189778862210","content":"啊，雅姐！雅姐！"},{"id":"30807998055153749","sort":"27649","type":1,"role":"29562169760114365","content":"哼，這還差不多。"},{"id":"30815518007964115","sort":"28673","type":1,"role":"29536307369018801","content":"路上，昏暗的路燈一閃一閃的"},{"id":"30815522840443773","sort":"29697","type":1,"role":"29536307369018801","content":"僅有幾戶熬夜看球的人家亮燈"},{"id":"30815545393882038","sort":"30721","type":1,"role":"29536307369018801","content":"街道寂靜一片，時(shí)不時(shí)響起兩聲凄慘的貓叫"},{"id":"30815548886480907","sort":"31745","type":1,"role":"29562169760114365","content":"干嘛？躲我后面干嘛？"},{"id":"30815549941222827","sort":"32769","type":1,"role":"29536443465554659","content":"我……"},{"id":"30815554239453236","sort":"33793","type":1,"role":"29562169760114365","content":"沒(méi)事，有我在，壞蛋休想過(guò)來(lái)！嘿嘿"},{"id":"30815556102234046","sort":"34817","type":1,"role":"29536443465554659","content":"不是，我怕黑……"},{"id":"30815560414764874","sort":"35841","type":1,"role":"29562169760114365","content":"……你大男子漢怕什么黑??？"},{"id":"30815591273993387","sort":"36865","type":1,"role":"29562169760114365","content":"你不是很多時(shí)候都大半夜寫(xiě)作嗎？"},{"id":"30815599059904672","sort":"37889","type":1,"role":"29562169760114365","content":"怕黑，那就邊走邊想你的劇情吧！"},{"id":"30815748322128986","sort":"38913","type":1,"role":"29536443465554659","content":"對(duì)了姐，不知道為什么，我今天連夜干出來(lái)的一章前輩看了卻說(shuō)不過(guò)關(guān)"},{"id":"30815776229839969","sort":"39937","type":1,"role":"29562169760114365","content":"天啊，你又寫(xiě)了？"},{"id":"30815779718159939","sort":"40961","type":1,"role":"29536443465554659","content":"嗯"},{"id":"30815785104563889","sort":"41985","type":1,"role":"29562169760114365","content":"這可不像是你啊，你的能力我很清楚，你可是標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的四千字先生"},{"id":"30815790474719263","sort":"43009","type":1,"role":"29562169760114365","content":"每天只寫(xiě)四千，過(guò)了四千就沒(méi)心情繼續(xù)寫(xiě)下去的那種"},{"id":"30815793679633623","sort":"44033","type":1,"role":"29562169760114365","content":"今天怎么突然這樣了？怕不是受了啥刺激？"},{"id":"30815803884642473","sort":"45057","type":1,"role":"29536307369018801","content":"只好將來(lái)龍去脈娓娓道來(lái)……"},{"id":"30815808195438795","sort":"46081","type":1,"role":"29562169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,"content":"感覺(jué)指頭幾乎要把我的氣管擰下來(lái)一樣，心臟一個(gè)勁地加速，都快跳出嗓子眼了！"},{"id":"30816756817035731","sort":"92161","type":1,"role":"29583807815597041","content":"而且，我有一瞬間感覺(jué)我要死了！往心里的怕啊！"},{"id":"30816761111897597","sort":"93185","type":1,"role":"29583730522015056","content":"很好，你已經(jīng)會(huì)了。"},{"id":"30816767841440240","sort":"94209","type":1,"role":"29583730522015056","content":"今天晚上就這樣吧，太晚了，我記得明天你得去桃溪橋那邊的郊區(qū)補(bǔ)習(xí)"},{"id":"30816769989863724","sort":"95233","type":1,"role":"29583807815597041","content":"是，那我先走了！"},{"id":"30816771063215610","sort":"96257","type":1,"role":"29583730522015056","content":"等等"},{"id":"30816773480156226","sort":"97281","type":1,"role":"29583807815597041","content":"前輩還有什么事情說(shuō)？"},{"id":"30816775358896609","sort":"98305","type":1,"role":"29583730522015056","content":"還是我送你吧。"}],"sentencecount":97}